Friday, February 24, 2012

Not So Welcome.





Attempting to run from her mistakes is what lead Faye Vunnown to move to Twinbrook, quite a change from the hustle and bustle of Bridgeport. The town was small and quaint, with no skyscrapers reaching out towards the sun, and no smoggy mornings. Faye looked forward to living here, as she was a quiet, shy sim with no dreams of being around large crowds of people; and with all the noise from honking taxi's to the chatter of sims, it was easy to lose her train of thought. The only thing that worried her about being in Twinbrook was that it would cause her dream of becoming a classical music composer would take longer than she hoped. 






Faye had a passion for playing instruments of all types, her only priority at the moment was to get a job at the local theatre and rise to the top of the best known artists. Her guitar was the only thing she brought with her from Bridgeport- and because she had little money only bought what was necessary for living. Faye sighed and thought to herself "The first thing is find out where that theater is so I can get a-"


"Um, hello?" said a dark skinned girl, with braided hair and red framed glasses, "I'm Alma Drill and my friend here," Alma said, pointing to a middle aged woman with blond hair and revealing clothing, "is Kat Hunter."


Alma walked inside the house, without much manners. Faye being a shy sim, was not one to speak up and simply ignored it, "Maybe this is how things work in this town..." she thought as she followed suit. 








As soon as Alma walked in, nothing but negative came out of her mouth. "Wow, you really do not have much in here. Didn't you think ahead of time before moving in?!"


"W-well it was really a last minute decision..." Faye mumbled, she really had not been expecting guests, especially not people THIS rude.






Kat yawned and said "Your house is like, so dull. Your TV only has three channels, and like, your screen is sooooooooo tiny, how am I supposed to watch hot athletes tackle eachother?!" Faye was obviously frustrated, but decided to ignore it, since she hoped they'd get bored enough to leave.








After they were done attacking Faye, they went after each other. Faye didn't want to get involved, and just stood there watching them argue. Eventually Alma went to watch TV, but Kat had other plans.






"EEEK-" Faye screamed in terror, while Kat laughed obnoxious.
"Gotcha!"






Tempted to kick them out right there and then, Faye composed herself and decided to make lunch for herself, since all this drama was making her hungry. 






This was her first time cooking, back in Bridgeport the family's butler would do most of the work around the house. She grew up a very pampered child, but never let this get to her head.



After successfully cooking her first meal, she was feeling pretty proud of herself. "If I can handle two crazy neighbors and make myself a square meal, then I can do anything!"




After a bit of choking, from too much spice, she noted to herself what she would have to do right the next time around. For a while, there was nothing but the sound Faye choking, the TV and occasional chatter of her crazy visitors. Faye couldn't help but listen to what they were saying.



"This girl has no personality! I'm embarrassed for her!" Alma said, "She doesn't even know how to properly treat her guests."
Kat clapped her hands together in agreement, "And to think I live right across the street, I hope she doesn't get all clingy."


Again, being too nice fr her own good Faye ignored their comments and decided it was getting late. She asked them to leave, with the excuse of saying that she had to go to the theater, which wasn't entirely a lie.



When she arrived at the theater, she was feeling excited. Faye hoped she wouldn't be too awkward while being interviewed, and that she could start as soon as possible.



And without a doubt, the boss, whose named was DeAndre Wolf, absolutely adored her and hired her on the spot. Feeling accomplished, she walked out of the theatre and had a mini celebration... but soon forgot what she was doing.



The sun was setting, and Faye went back home. All the way home she planned out everything, guitar classes, getting to know her co-workers, beginning a new life. She wanted desperately to forget the life she left behind in Bridgeport, and was eager to begin her life here.



After a quick shower, she changed into her nighties and went to bed.



And that night, she slept soundly, with dreams of her future.





P.S
This first part was really slow, with only one sim there wasn't much interaction other than her crazy neighbors, but they were just big meanies so when they left Faye was in the red with them. This is my first time writing a story in the longest time, so I apologize for any grammar mistake or overall cheesy-ness. I am totally open to critique and what not so go for it! Hopefully it'll pick up in the next few episodes. :)

6 comments:

  1. Wonderful start. Your writing is very good! Don't feel bad about it being boring, my first chapter was boring too. =] I must say that Faye is a nicer person than I am because I would have to those rude neighbors to hit the road! Lol.

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    1. I also forgot to say that you just need to make sure your pictures are small enough for your blog. You have one that is really big. I wasn't sure if you knew that or not. Also, I can't find the follow button. =/

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    2. Thaaaaaanks~
      Yeah I noticed the picture thing.. I was mostly messing around with this post last night. No idea where the follow button is... lets see if I can fix that. x)

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  2. THE EYE MASK ASDFGHJKL. I've never seen that before. xD It took me by surprise.

    Also, crappy neighbors suck! -shakes fist-

    My one suggestion is that you post for us your Legacy roll somewhere, whether it's at the end of this chapter or maybe put in the sidebar. 8D I know you're new to Blogspot, so if you need some tips on how to do that if you're interested, feel free to ask.

    Otherwise, I'm excited to see how Faye's life goes! 8B

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    1. LOL! It was my favorite part really, not really sure how she gets around the house. I tried putting on the side bar, but it wasn't centered so it looked odd and I took it off. Am I putting it in the wrong spot oooooooorrrrr?

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  3. The pictures, generation roll and I am working on trying to figure out this follow thing, yay I'm getting a hang of things! Thanks guys. :)

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